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记叙文主要是由时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和结果(result)六要素构成。一般来说，记叙文要把事件和人物流动写清晰，这六要素缺一不可。
叙事类写作以叙述事件为主，可以说事件是记叙的核心。写事件要交代事情的前因后果，可按事件发生的时间先后顺序依次叙述。同时要求重点凸起，目的明确，详略得当。当然，构思新奇也是写好叙事文的重要要求。这里的构思就是指文章的立意要新奇，组织材料和表现手法上要巧妙。在句式上，表示本人的经历或耳闻目睹的事件用第一人称，表示他人的经历和事件用第三人称。 小学生作文网
【赏析】 A Football Game
Yesterday we had a football game against the team from Class Four. Their players were good. We really felt a little afraid of them. But Zhang Xin, the leader of our class team, said, "Although they are good players, their team is weak." Zhang Xin is about 1.68 meters tall and his number is twelve. He can kick two or three goals every match. Then he told us,"Remember that we are a team and we'll win the game."
At the beginning of the match, a player from Class Four ran with the ball. Zhang Xin ran over quickly to stop him. He got the ball and kicked the goal! He kept on passing the ball to other players. We passed the ball to each other like him. The players from Class Four were getting anxious. They were angry with us. But we continued to pass the ball.
At last we kicked four goals and they kicked two. We won the game! We were very happy.
(辽宁省鞍山市立山区东方中学初二 杨 刚)
【评析】本文的成功之处就是构思新奇，条理清晰，行文表达天然流畅。文中的事件发铺变化较多，但稳定。小作者记叙了"昨天我们班和四班入行了一场足球赛，我们班以4比2获胜，打败了往年的冠戎行--四班"。文章凸起Zhang Xin表现得棒极了。
【建议】叙事类写作要表达清晰事件发生的时间、地点、原因和结果等内容。在结构方面，大多采用纵向结构，即文章在安排内容时，各类细节按其出场的先后顺序或以事情发生的时间顺序排列；在句式方面，应绝量使用简朴句，避免使用复合句(除非必要)。由于简朴句的结构比较简朴，意思明确；在时态上，因为所记的内容大多是过往发生的事，所以这些句子中谓语动词大多用过往时态。
建议大家从模仿别人的范文开始，描写我们的莱庠痱迸、校运动会等场面，捉住重点，绝量使用课本中泛起的短语。相信这样模仿出来的文章一定也是一篇好文章。快快步履吧。
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