2006年高考英语满分作文及名师评析

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【全国卷II】

　　【试题归放】
　　假定您是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信吓菽校躲书楼的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。高中作文网
　　留意：
　　1、字数100左右
　　2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯
　　3、开头语已为您写好

　　Dear Bob,

　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.
　　There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.
　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.

　　Yours sincerely,
　　Li hua

　　[名师点评]
　　本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章乙Ｌ句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的躲书楼，这么好的躲书楼怎么不感动他的外国朋友呢？

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