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成考英语论说文写作方法与技巧 多用书面语
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二、句子修辞初中作文网
（一）应用修辞，增强说服力
适当采用比喻、头韵（即连续数个单词的头音或头字母相同）、夸张等修辞手法，采用幽默、泼薪峁沟刃醋魇址ǎ可以把道理说得更加透彻，把观点表达得更加光鲜，把清淡的内容表现得更加生动，从而更好地传递信息，增添文采，激发读者的共识。例如：
1.Many people have tried a thousand times before they achieve their goals.（夸张）
2.Only a madman would choose to live in a modern city.（夸张）
3.Our life would be like soup without salt or flowers without sunlight.（比喻）
4.The best way is to reduce，reuse and recycle.（头韵）
5.For children.the Internet is another way to waste more hours.（幽默）
6.If you want to earn a satisfactory grade in the training program，you must arrive punctually，you must behave courteously，and you must study conscientiously.（泼薪峁梗
值得留意的是，比喻等修辞格的使用及谚语等的引用关乎作者对英语文化的理解，由于它们在英语中的意义去去与我们的理解大相径庭，很轻易误用。只有多多学习，当真分析它们的应用环境，使用起来才能锦上添花。假如没有十分的掌握，切不可生搬硬套，否则会适得其反。
（二）表达到位，才能言之成理通常。
作者对自己论述的观点是清晰的，但在将观点传达给读者时，去去由于用词不正确，逻辑欠严密，或因受中国式思维的干扰而令表达不到位，结果使读者如堕五里雾中。作者应站在读者的态度上考虑题目，始终牢记“读者明不明白”才是判定写作是否成功的最重要尺度。请望以下几个表达不到位的例句及其改正方法。
1.They gave me what I need，but not what I want.析：want可译为“想要”。从汉语角度望，整个句子是流畅的，但从英语的逻辑上望，want与need的意义极易搅浑，因此整个句子意义表达不到位，含糊不清。可以改为：They have given me what I need but not What I often ask for.
2.Maybe there are also some disadvantages of living in a city，but I think they are less important.I feel convenient and comfortable.析：句子后半部门的逻辑关系未交代清晰，令人有“前语不搭后语”的感觉。可以改为：Theere are surely disadvantages of living in a city，too，but they are less important and tend to be de-emphasized.For the sake of the advantages mentioned above，I prefer to live in a city.
3.Different people have different choices.Some people like living in a city and some people like living in a village.析：Choice的含义十分宽泛，因此与后面的like不相当，应改为：Different people have different likes and dislikes.Some like to live in a city，others like to live in a village.
4.The people，the society and so on were quite different from now.析：The people，the society依然不足以让读者完全理解要论述的话题，可改为：The peopIe，the society and other aspects of life were quite different from now.
5.Thieves should be sentenced for what they have done.析：使用sentence不免难免言过实在，应改为：Thieves should be punished for their wrongdoing.
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