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整篇文章有整篇文章的中央论点,每一段落有每一段落的分论点。选取论点时要问一问自己:这一论点是否会让自己信服?假如—个论点连自己都说服不了,就要抛却它。段落论点的呈现不能羞羞答答,犹报琵琶半遮面,也不能深躲不露,让读者往总结和回纳,而必需在文章开篇或段落开头就亮出来。论点置于篇首或段首,才能纲举目张,也是确保不跑题的条件。以下两个例子中,第一个结构疏松,群龙无首,令读者不知所云;而第二个例子则中央凸起,章法严谨。请望:作文网高中
1.Firstly,it is very convenient in daily life.There are many shops and supermarkets in a city.I can buy everything I need easily in these places.When I am sick,I can easily see a doctor in any clinic or hospital.Transport services are good in a city.when I want to go somewhere,I can take a bus,a train or something else.There are also many kinds of entertainment in a city.Public buildings(such as libraries)and parks can easity be found in a city,too.作文网高中
2.First.it is convenient and comfortable to live in a city.To begin with,there is good housing in a city,as all the houses and flats are well-equipped with good facilities and surrounded by modern amenities such as places of entertainment,public libraries and parks.
而中央句的写法也有讲究。中央句必需能高度概括所在段落的论据,它的枢纽词应该在每—个论据中都有重复或适当体现。那种无关痛痒的叙述或说明性的句子,是不相宜用作中央句的。例如:
1.Students always feel relaxed and happy during breaks.(叙述性句子)
2.Break times are scheduled for about 10 minutes.(说明性句子)
以下等于论述“学校划定‘课间学生只能呆在自己的班级里’对吗?”的一篇学生习作:
Although some people believe that students should stay in their own classrooms during break times,I would like to argue that we should be allowed to spend break times in another class.
The most important reason for believing that is that many students have friends in other classes.We spend all day in our own classroom,and break times are the only time we have to spend with other friends.It can become very tedious(令人厌倦的)to have to spend even more time with the same people.
A further reason for allowing student to choose where they spend their break times is that it would stop arguements.If students are forced to spend time with classmates who are not good friends,they can annoy each other.This leads to problems that have to be sorted out by teachers.
Teachers argue that we all should stay in our own classes,because it is then easier to know what is going on.They say that it is difficult to keep track of students when they are walking round the corridors.However,students could be given the chance to choose a different classroom to spend the whole break time in.That would mean that there would not be any students in the corridors.
As I have explained,although it might be a little easier to manage when everyone stays in their own classroom,it would make break times happier for all students if they were allowed to choose where they spent their time.
这篇范文符合“四块论”的基本模式,正反论述兼顾,结构严谨,中央凸起。
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